We talked down the stars
in a lazy haze
As the sky crept behind moon
and the ground turned red,
Insanity tickling the inside of skulls
with cold and pale fingers
You rolled from me
and whispered ''you fail me''
in skeletal voices.
The night smiled with crooked teeth,
bright eyed and fishy fleshed














Comments
"skeletal" voices is perhaps a bit redundant in the aftermath of the skull line, which i adore and refuse to recommend be replaced in its stead.
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Uncertain as the fingering of a chord torn prematurely, from a piano's womb!
(very nice piece by the way, stunning metaphors)
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-- Rise up against your fate, Free your hate -
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Uncertain as the fingering of a chord torn prematurely, from a piano's womb!
I liiiiiike it....
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Uncertain as the fingering of a chord torn prematurely, from a piano's womb!
Mmm I guess I haven't approprate music tastes
"Insanity tickling the inside of skulls
with cold and pale fingers"
anddd..
"The night smiled with crooked teeth,
bright eyed and fishy fleshed"
On second thought, the latter is just too amazing and original... hmm.. *shrug* I dunno. Did I get at least one right?
PS. The last line's my favorite.
But the first guess was all my creation
Thanks so much for taking the time to read !
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Uncertain as the fingering of a chord torn prematurely, from a piano's womb!
Well, I got one right... right?
(but you did cheat me
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